Jamie Lynn
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Post by Jamie Lynn on Jan 7, 2007 2:51:20 GMT 10
enrollmentStudent's Name:Jamie Rockwell Student's Age:15 Student's Grade:9th Student's Career Path:Stars In Zoey 101 registrationDescription of Character: Tall For Her Age,Slender,Blonde Hiar That Will Be Darker Usally,Slender,Small Hips,Short Hair But Tends To Get Veary Long. Personality of Character: Kinds,Tends To be The Leader Of Things And Stand Out In A Crowd Of People,Tough But Sweet. Quite Smart But Sometimes She Has Been Known To Fail Classes. She Is Like She Is In The Hit T.V Show Zoey 101. Sample Role Play: It Was Summer Break In Her Mind Since She Was Done Shooting For Three Months For The Hit Series Zoey 101.Holding Her PCA Duffel's Bags With Her PCA Hoodie On She Raced Towards Her Sisters Convertible Waiting In The Drive Way For Her. Her Light Blond Hair Was Tied Back In A Pony Tail But A Cople Strands Hung Loose. Her Jeans Flew Back As Her And Her Little Brother Dustin Raced To the Car.Yelling Shot Gun! She Jumped Into the Front Seat Looking At Her Sister Who Had Her Perfect Miss.Spears Bodice As Usual. Dustin Jumped Into The Back Seat As He Waited. Britney Sighed Sorry Jamie Mom Is Sending You To A Private School For Three Months. Groans Escaped Both Dustin As Jamie. Laughing Britney Said Dustin You Are Going To Orlando With Dad, Jamie Groaned More As they Headed Off To Yet Another Boarding School.
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Post by rudiehall on Jan 7, 2007 13:17:08 GMT 10
You can't use real people. The character has to be ficticious (made up yourself). Also, there's no need to capatalise every single word. The spelling/grammer wasn't that great either, there is a spell check function you should use. Finally, you didn't use the speechmarks, and everything looked sorta squashed together and hard to read.
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Jamie Lynn
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Post by Jamie Lynn on Jan 7, 2007 15:30:20 GMT 10
ok but i worked really hard on this so why not?
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Post by rudiehall on Jan 7, 2007 15:45:59 GMT 10
It's against the rules. Sorry. Also, a photo doesn't count as a description.
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Jamie Lynn
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Post by Jamie Lynn on Jan 8, 2007 11:04:42 GMT 10
k i fixed it.
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Post by rudiehall on Jan 8, 2007 11:17:37 GMT 10
Yeah, changing the last name doesn't make the character any different.
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Jamie Lynn
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Post by Jamie Lynn on Jan 9, 2007 7:45:19 GMT 10
please i worked really hard on this.
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Post by Allie Dawson on Jan 9, 2007 16:19:22 GMT 10
Okay, not to be mean, but just taking a character out of a TV show doesn't constitute working really hard. Why don't you try making up a character yourself? It'll most likely be more fun for you, because you can make them however you want.
Please, it is against the rules to use someone else's character, so it would be good if you could cooperate?
Thanks, Jess.
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zl
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Post by zl on Mar 16, 2010 12:08:01 GMT 10
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